Raine's Secret Garden

Undone

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I’ve made my escape, at last–AT LAST!!
Having been chained to the walls of that cave for so long, I’d forgotten the truth. The rumors among the rest of the prisoners insisted there really was such a thing as “light” beyond the darkness. But it had been so very long…

It took forever, I think, to escape, scraping at the raw materials of the wall with little more than a quill, then dragging my weary body through the muck and mire until the water ran clear. Up the jagged stones, forcing my bleeding fingers to climb higher and higher still, to hold on, until…until…

LIGHT!!

‘Tis true! I can see it, brilliant and beautiful, beckoning me to leave the darkness and enter a world of color and air and life!
But wait–there are stirrings from below. One of the guardians has latched onto my dangling leg and is pulling me back. He’s murmuring something about edits, about having only finished the first round, and how I must return to the cave, embrace the shadows again.
Noooooo!

HELP ME!! If there’s anyone out, lend a hand, a rope, a prayer, for God’s sake!

Category: Writing —  Tags: Raine @ 3:21 am ·   Comments (12)
  • BernardL says:

    Any word from the ‘Darkness’ about how many rounds there are. :)

  • Raine says:

    Three rounds, Bernard.
    Just shoot me now…

  • BernardL says:

    I’ve done three rounds on ‘Cold Blooded’ and I received an ‘I’ll get back to you’. I guess I found the special ‘Darkness’. :)

  • Amie says:

    LOL Bless ur heart. I do feel ur pain!!!

  • Suzanne Perazzini says:

    I’m off to Peru on Saturday so can’t help. Sorry. You know I would otherwise.

  • Lynn says:

    In the midst of battling my way out of the salt mines (even now I see light at the end of the shaft) some heartless overseer decided I need to spend time in the galleys. So now I am hacking away at the last chapters and slogging through the rocky proof seas on my breaks.

    July 1st cannot come soon enough. :)

  • Raine says:

    I guess I found the special ‘Darkness’

    Bernard, I THOUGHT I recognized you…second row to the left, right? ;)

  • Raine says:

    LOL Bless ur heart. I do feel ur pain!!!

    Amie, I just…I just…phfft. :(

  • Raine says:

    I’m off to Peru on Saturday so can’t help.

    Cruel, cruel Suzanne.
    (have a great time, hon!).

  • Raine says:

    some heartless overseer decided I need to spend time in the galleys

    Sistah!!
    They never stop, never rest, and are never satisfied.
    But you’re almost there, Lynn! The sunlight and more nesting birds await! :D

  • Sunny Lyn says:

    congrats on the new Samhain book debuting this fall – and hang in there as far as the edits – lol.

    hugs!

  • Raine says:

    Hi, Sunny!! :kiss:
    Good to see you—and thanks, lol.